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Young Adult Dark Urban Fantasy Author ~

Free Write

Between the ebb and flow.

A loop of words, a hearts internal tug.

Expression.

Streams of unconsciousness painting the page.

Freedom.

Thoughts flood, fingers stroke keys.

Such satisfaction gained from these reflection streams.

Such ease.

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16 responses

  1. Pingback: Thursday Poets Rally Week 45 (June 2-8, 2011) | Promising Poets' Poetry Cafe

    • Thanks for the interest:)

      June 5, 2011 at 11:16 pm

  2. Simply impressive ..
    I like the how the emotions flows throughout the poetry
    Here’s mine poetry work ..
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/talent-underground/poetry-zone/

    HAPPY RALLY !! xD

    June 5, 2011 at 11:40 pm

    • Thanks so much:) I’ll check your site out as well!

      June 6, 2011 at 11:40 am

  3. Truly liked it. Beautiful expression πŸ™‚

    Puplumages is Purvi πŸ™‚
    I am from ~
    http://puplumages.wordpress.com/2011/05/27/laments-on-the-loss-of-love/

    June 7, 2011 at 2:59 am

    • Thanks so much. I really appreciate that:)

      June 7, 2011 at 8:32 am

  4. welcome in, smiles.

    incredible imagery.

    πŸ™‚

    June 7, 2011 at 9:59 am

    • Thank you:)

      June 7, 2011 at 10:36 am

  5. Beautiful it really captures those wonderful moments when the words just flow uninterrupted

    June 8, 2011 at 4:31 am

    • Yes, when you don’t need to think…just feel. Thanks so much:)

      June 8, 2011 at 9:33 am

  6. Just Coop It

    Lovely piece! Love the ocean/river motif. And GREAT word choice. Very nice poem.
    I have some poetry on my blog too. If you’re interested check it out and tell me what you think. πŸ™‚
    http://www.justcoopit.wordpress.com

    June 8, 2011 at 3:38 pm

    • Thanks so much:)

      June 8, 2011 at 4:54 pm

  7. Great words!!!!

    June 8, 2011 at 6:39 pm

    • πŸ™‚ Thank you.

      June 8, 2011 at 8:51 pm

  8. Well penned, I enjoyed the flow of it.

    June 10, 2011 at 3:07 pm

    • I appreciate that:)

      June 10, 2011 at 3:13 pm

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