Free Write

Between the ebb and flow.

A loop of words, a hearts internal tug.

Expression.

Streams of unconsciousness painting the page.

Freedom.

Thoughts flood, fingers stroke keys.

Such satisfaction gained from these reflection streams.

Such ease.

This entry was posted on June 5, 2011 by Laney. It was filed under Poetry, Thoughts, Writing and was tagged with Inspiration, love for writing, poetry, writers burn out.

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- Laney
  
  Thanks for the interest:)
  
  June 5, 2011 at 11:16 pm
  
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ashbeezone

Simply impressive ..
I like the how the emotions flows throughout the poetry
Here’s mine poetry work ..
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/talent-underground/poetry-zone/

HAPPY RALLY !! xD

June 5, 2011 at 11:40 pm

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- Laney
  
  Thanks so much:) I’ll check your site out as well!
  
  June 6, 2011 at 11:40 am
  
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Purvi

Truly liked it. Beautiful expression 🙂

Puplumages is Purvi 🙂
I am from ~
http://puplumages.wordpress.com/2011/05/27/laments-on-the-loss-of-love/

June 7, 2011 at 2:59 am

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- Laney
  
  Thanks so much. I really appreciate that:)
  
  June 7, 2011 at 8:32 am
  
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Jingle

welcome in, smiles.

incredible imagery.

🙂

June 7, 2011 at 9:59 am

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- Laney
  
  Thank you:)
  
  June 7, 2011 at 10:36 am
  
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mindlovemisery

Beautiful it really captures those wonderful moments when the words just flow uninterrupted

June 8, 2011 at 4:31 am

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- Laney
  
  Yes, when you don’t need to think…just feel. Thanks so much:)
  
  June 8, 2011 at 9:33 am
  
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Just Coop It

Lovely piece! Love the ocean/river motif. And GREAT word choice. Very nice poem.
I have some poetry on my blog too. If you’re interested check it out and tell me what you think. 🙂
http://www.justcoopit.wordpress.com

June 8, 2011 at 3:38 pm

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- Laney
  
  Thanks so much:)
  
  June 8, 2011 at 4:54 pm
  
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mkinchlow

Great words!!!!

June 8, 2011 at 6:39 pm

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- Laney
  
  🙂 Thank you.
  
  June 8, 2011 at 8:51 pm
  
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Tally

Well penned, I enjoyed the flow of it.

June 10, 2011 at 3:07 pm

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- Laney
  
  I appreciate that:)
  
  June 10, 2011 at 3:13 pm
  
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